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Enter my Demons and Monsters by ~Blue44:iconBlue44:



Now I lay me down to sleep.
This is the prayer, in my mind I keep.

I grip my pillow, and my jaw is chattering.
In the closet, I hear a clattering.

The monsters and demons in my mind go crazy.
I feel like running to turn on the light, but my legs grow lazy.

My covers, Boogyman protection, cannot help me from these creatures.
Their claws are sharp, and faces hold startling features.

I sit here all alone in the dark of this house,
Wondering if it's really a monster, or just a tiny mouse.

A tear rolls down my cheek, and I start to breath hard.
I just wish my imagination, like a door, could be barred.

The steps of a thing creep closer, thudding its way to my room.
I think to myself that this is going to be a night of doom.

The door squeaks open, and a shadow walks in.
Like any other monster, it is tall, and thin.

The growl coming from its throat scares me to death.
The light flicks on, and I realize it's much worse, my father, Seth.

He takes off his belt, and raises his arm,
And swing it hard, and my body sets off its alarm

One hit, two hits, three hits, I'm bleeding.
No one can seem to hear my screaming.

Four hits, five hits, six, and seven.
I fear this night I might end up in heaven.

Eight hits, nine hits, and then up to ten.
The pain is so much, I pass out then.

I awake, and am greeted by the Angel of Death.
I realize then that he beat me to death.

I take his hand, and go off into the dark.
As we walk, I tell him, "My name is Mark!"

He smiles, and nods as we walk away,
To his palace where I shall live for the rest of my days.
©2006-2009 ~Blue44
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Author's Comments

listening to Enter Sandman by Metallica. I'm working on a little something right now but i decided to do this just because i havent been writing much lately.

Update: honestly, i think this is my best poem to date. out of the...lots that i've done, this one takes the cake. i'm so proud of this one=D

UPDATE 2: to date NOW(october 2008), this is maybe my second best poem behind The L Disease. I like that one more than this one lol
also, put more punctuation. this was featured in some news here on dA by :iconflynn-the-cat:
article here - [link]

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:iconlivindeadgrrrl:
I like it! a little word goofs in it...but very nice!

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~Moops~
:iconblue44:
aww man i goofed? where?
thanks for liking it though =D

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very freaking cool people
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:icontoiletbrush:
hehe brilliant i really liked this one! good song too :D

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Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is.
- Albert Camus
:iconirish-wasabi:
i like it. ^__^ very nice

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Assassinations are the most practical solutions to common problems.
:iconk-especial:
fuckin awsome man :D great job! :w00t:

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"sit yer ass down in th' chair and drink yer %$@&# damn tea!" - Cid
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:iconstrive4luv:
very nice, good job. I may have said it before, but I will say it again: I admire your style!
:+fav:

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